Talk:Earth-11201984/@comment-6548012-20151023181403/@comment-6548012-20151024105219

Given my knowledge of anime, and given the fact this is an anime fanfiction mainly, I can't really judge. But if you want me to criticize it as, well, actual fiction, then I only see names and pictures of characters and nothing else. No context, no idea, so I'm not really sure what to say.