Thread:Jacky 50A/@comment-6548012-20160827192124/@comment-6548012-20160904175755

I don't mind helping, though I'm also very sure you can do it fine&mdash;does the problem reside in how you understand the English language? If so, why not write it in your native language, which I guess is Bahasa Indonesia, (most specifically Dialek Jakarta) or in another language you feel more familiar with, translate it literally, (without trying to give it English grammatical rules or anything, just word-for-word) and then use the different varying sentences you can make to give more depth to your characters? I think this would work out pretty great ;)

I already told you on the chat, the only way this war can end is either through the military or nuclear destruction of the opponent, and in such a case, there's no possibility that any supervillain could stop it. I'm not saying Mongul can't be an important conflict, he can be, but the war would never end for this guy.