Talk:Matthew Murdock (Earth-5417)/@comment-6548012-20151012094443

You've done a real great job with that one, good job. Though for the quote, it seems a little bit too straightforward, when it looks like Hawkeye wants to instill fear in his adversary, maybe you could just use implicit, such “... I'm the only one who's gonna be walking out of here,” that makes it all more, y'know, badass-as-balls. But otherwise, it's astonishing.