User blog comment:RoninTheMasterless/Reexamining Earth-51/@comment-6548012-20151211131319/@comment-6548012-20151212125910

That's not exactly what I mean. I mean that going from a mostly original character that you've already established to an already very popular character in your realities, with origins that are very similar to his mainstream counterpart could be seen as a regression. About the whole Batman Beyond/psyche thing, that's what I was hoping for, concerning his development&mdash;a hero that wouldn't really be if you gave him the chance. But, to me, that's still very adventure-focused, which is good. Or at least, if that's what you're aiming for.

Well, you made Superman more comparable to oneself, so, on a community scale, that's a really good thing, since most comic book fans whine about Superman not being closer to humans. Though, what I personally like, is how you arrange Superman with simple additions, yet make them efficient. If there's one thing I have a problem with though, is Superman being a little too psychologically close to a younger Jason Todd. I'm guessing there's something you'll do with it, or not, that's really not a big deal, given the consistency of the character.

For Holt and Cyborg, it's not really something that I dislike. On the philosophical level, I'm leaving it to you, since I'm not going to judge this aspect just by reading an origin story, makes sense. If you are going for a more pro comic book-styled approach, then I think it's a good idea to just overlook the trauma when it first happens, when we don't know the characters, to soon have it become more, and more present, as the reader comes to learn who the characters are as humans. So, a lot of potential, but for now, not much information. I'm not gonna shit in the lake, I have nothing else to say that is constructive about them.

If you don't touch Raven, I'm not doing so either, I'll just wait to see what you'll do.

For Batgirl, I didn't think you'd do that, and that surprise me. The idea of a pretty deranged Jason Todd living in the middle of what I would call a Bat-Coalition, and Batgirl being a little bit of a mindless puppet to Batman's influence is really good. I'm going to like this.

So, my advice is generally still the same about the reality, though I'm now more content with the information you've given me, and more confident. I'm going to have a look at Earth-51 when you start the changes.